Sapphokit (Ki) ~ CBA[]
D'awww, meh Sapphokit <3 I luff her. I love the face markings especially. Comments, concerns, quips, quotes or conundrums? ❄Snowie❄ Merry Christmas and happy Hanukkah! 04:41, December 6, 2012 (UTC)
OH MY GOD SEXY. The only things I can think of is to get rid of the waste and define the shading. <333--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 13:11, December 6, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
LOVE THIS SO MUCH <3 In my opinion, the shading is actully a bit dark, and should be lightened and blurred. ❀Lilydust~❀
Smudge/blur the markings a tad and darken the shading a tad. Also, I know it's probably not on the chart, but could you add a little shading on the haunch or whatever kitty thighs are called? xD Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:51, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-ups! <3 ❄Snowie❄ Merry Christmas and happy Hanukkah! 01:50, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
The shading still needs to be defined. <3--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 01:58, December 7, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
No it doesn't. Everyone told me it should be lightened, not defined. If I defined it, it would be too dark. The shading has to be like a white cat's shading, not a normal colored because then the white would look gray. ❄Snowie❄ Merry Christmas and happy Hanukkah! 21:37, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
Could you blur the ear pink just a tiny bit. Absolutly Beautiful, Snowie <3 ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 01:24, December 8, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading just a little bit more. Amazing, Snow~ ShoonChristmas is in the air~! 15:27, December 8, 2012 (UTC)
She barely has shading as it is... I can't really lighten it anymore... Also, the earpink looks weird when I blur it anymore... ❄Snowie❄ Merry Christmas and happy Hanukkah! 20:19, December 8, 2012 (UTC)
Beautiful <3 CBA? ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 17:00, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
Approved Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 21:33, December 11, 2012 (UTC)
Reversalfox (W)~ CBA[]
Meh. Comments? Snowfern I'm not giving up 18:21, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the markings and make the black thingy look more like fur. Smexah, Fern. <3 Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:22, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
I think the markings are fine, imho, just make that black fur on his neck like 'furish', But Beautiful Nref <3 ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 01:27, December 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reups. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 01:29, December 8, 2012 (UTC)
It looks really pretty, Ferneh. Lighten/blur the shading a tiny bit, please? Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 20:52, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
The shading is actually as light as I can get it so that I don't have to define it later. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 22:21, December 10, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 22:54, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
ApprovedSnowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 16:41, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Apple (K) ~ CBA[]
Evil. Very very evil, shading. Comments?Snowfern I'm not giving up 18:57, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading. <3--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 22:17, December 7, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
Shading's light enough. Define teh earpink to make her look prettier. <3 ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 23:10, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reups~ Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 21:42, December 11, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading a bit. But cute Nref <3 ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 22:53, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
The shading looks fine to me, personally. For a white cat...this is beautiful. Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 23:59, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 19:04, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 19:11, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reversalfox (Q) ~ CBA[]
So sexxu<3333 Comments? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 22:16, December 11, 2012 (UTC)
I can't find a thing wrong with it. Gorgeous <33 ❆Lilydust❆Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas~ 17:05, December 13, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the markings on her face a bit, maybe lower their opacity the teensiest bit, and lighten tail and hind-leg shading. It's beautiful, Snow. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:15, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
- AGH I mean Ferk. xD Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:16, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
Everything is the same as her warrior. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 00:18, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading. -BlazeXApple forever 19:05, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
Reups. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 17:09, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 19:05, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 19:11, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Everlastingkit ~ CBA[]
This is meh Everlastingkit <3 Comments? ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 01:54, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
Purty <3 blur the earpink and teh paws, and define the shading a tad. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 02:33, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reups! ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 02:46, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
Pretty, define the eye depth? It looks flat. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 02:46, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
It isnt flat, it has 4 colors in it.... ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 02:49, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
It does look flat.--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 03:15, December 9, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
Reups! Fine, I changed it ;-; ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 03:19, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
The fur looks a bit too ragged. Make it a little more tidy please? Keep it ragged if you want, but at least decrease the raggediness a little. It's really pretty <33 Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 20:50, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
It supposed to be ragged like that.... ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 01:47, December 10, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 16:10, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 19:11, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Lilypaw (AC) (Kit) ~ CBA[]
This beautiful charart was made by Feather, but I had her permission and she's going to let me take over. I really like her and all of her colors were taken from her Life Image. Comments? Lilydust in the wind
Define the shading. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 01:29, December 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Changes may not be showing, if not, here's a iaza link: http://www.iaza.com/work/121205C/iaza16169275960800.png Lilydust in the wind
Lighten the earpink. ✖ crys the switch is now on OFF✖01:51, December 5, 2012 (UTC)
I don't know, it looks fine to me. I like it the way it is, but if anyone else says that I need to lighten it, I will. c: Lilydust in the wind
Yeah, it could be lightened a bit... I can't even see it. This is smexy, though <33 --Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:49, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reups~ ❀Lilydust~❀ 22:16, December 10, 2012 (UTC)
Comments? :3 ❀Lilydust~❀ 15:32, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the pelt a bit on the haunch maybe, and smudge the stripes. This is coming out really well, lily. *clap* Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:29, December 13, 2012 (UTC)
It's bright because of shading, and I can't use the smudge tool. c: ❆Lilydust❆Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas~ 00:35, December 13, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 22:55, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 19:11, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Shadowkit (Ki) ~ CBA[]
I love Shadowkit so much. Comments? ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 22:57, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
GIRATINA REVJHBITFVNJT Blur the shading a bit. — ♪ Eremin ♪ Sorry, I'm obsessed ☆ 23:06, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
RE-UPS ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 23:18, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
OMGSOCUTE CBA? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 23:00, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 19:11, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Shinefeather (W) ~ CBA[]
Blur the belly white. Amazing <3 RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 00:54, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 19:06, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 19:11, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Freezekit (K)~ CBA[]
Ermehgerd I love him<3 His page is so... Nice... He'll be up for a silver nomination very soon, I asure you that<3 He's so special to me<3 Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 16:46, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
WOW. CBA? -BlazeXApple forever 16:55, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 19:14, December 18, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Guppyfin (Ki) ~ CBA[]
File:Guppyfin.kit.png Okay so I tried. I'll add the categories in a bit...not entirely sure what categories to add.....but I'll give it a shot. Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 21:30, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
It's awesome Leggu <3 For categories, add "_____'s Cats, Charart," and... IDK DX Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 21:49, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
I just added the "Kit Charart" one...that's all Stoem and the others told me to. asdfdk I can add any others later. Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 21:56, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
<3333 Blur the shading. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 01:21, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
I said add te 'Kit Charart' cats gory and that's all that needs to be added. Or if its a warrior, then 'Warrior Charart' and so on. ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 01:39, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I only blurred trhe shaidng a smidge...I like the darkness it's at, and any more would make it look too blotchy. Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 03:56, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 03:58, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 19:15, December 18, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Bloomfrost (Q) ~ CBA[]
BLOOMFROST 8D. Comments? Bbunlegs Bbun (talk) 19:23, December 17, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
CBA? -BlazeXApple forever 19:53, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 20:13, December 18, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Bunnytail (D) ~ CBA[]
Blur the shading. It looks dark on a white cat. ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 23:01, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
Thicken the tail lineart a smidge. You don't have to darken it if you thin it out a little. Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 00:05, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Bbunlegs Bbun (talk) 19:07, December 16, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
CBA? -BlazeXApple forever 20:01, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 20:14, December 18, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Nightheart (Q) ~ CBA[]
This...... is a failure...... *kills self* Comments? --❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 16:59, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
Fill in the white pixels <3 Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 17:12, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading and smudge the earpink into the pelt. Nice job~ —.neha you are my everything.
The shading's very dark, it's in the wrong places and there is a pink smudge on her right shoulder. Otherwise, good job :3 ❄Snowie❄ Merry Christmas and happy Hanukkah! 17:14, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
The pink smudge is the scar on her shoulder. *fail* --❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 17:15, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
Reups ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 17:56, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
Blue the shading a little more. But she's definably cute <3 ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 18:01, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
There's a leetle waste around her. Beautiful 8D — ♪ Eremin ♪ Sorry, I'm obsessed ☆ 18:02, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
Embershadow ish so lucky <3333333333333 blur the earpinkie <333 ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 19:52, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
Theres some waste on the right side of the head too. ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 22:34, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
K! Fixing! ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 22:35, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
Reups I know the waste is there..... I'm trying to get it..... *kills waste* ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 23:54, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
Reups ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 00:13, December 4, 2012 (UTC)
Reups Again.... ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 00:20, December 4, 2012 (UTC)
Eeek! CBA? ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 00:21, December 4, 2012 (UTC)
Reups It was requested the scar be more sharpened near the ends. ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 23:07, December 4, 2012 (UTC)
And the scar is faded a little because she got it a while ago, as an apprentice. ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 23:08, December 4, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink. And there's waste scattered around the image.--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk)Crytid Hunter93
I can't even see the scar anymore, Mossu. Define it a little bit please? Sexy <3 Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 02:31, December 6, 2012 (UTC)
- "And the scar is faded a little because she got it a while ago, as an apprentice." It's fine imho. — ♪ Eremin ♪ Sorry, I'm obsessed ☆ 04:41, December 8, 2012 (UTC)
I can't blur the earpink anymore dammit but ok..... Reups. ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 15:14, December 8, 2012 (UTC)
Please comment because it's driving me insane. x.x ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 21:40, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I cannot get that damn waste. x.x ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 20:46, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Bbunlegs Bbun (talk) 20:48, December 17, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 20:53, December 18, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Skyfall (K) ~ CBA[]
Comments? Her history and trivia says she was a kit. Bbunlegs
Make her nose a gray color. Black cats rarely have pink noses ouo Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 00:07, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Gray the earpink just a tiny bit. Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 04:54, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Ermahgawd SKYFALL 8DDDDDDDDDD There's a little patch of black where the haunch meets the paw and the tail, if you know what I mean~ -BlazeXApple forever 10:26, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Idk what you mean by gray the earpink. Bbun (talk) 19:20, December 16, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
The earpink's fine. It probably wouldn't match completely. CBA? -BlazeXApple forever
Blur teh earpink to our right. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 02:28, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 02:31, December 18, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 02:31, December 19, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Fernshade (Q) ~ Approved[]
She is a Queen, it just hasn't been confirmed by the medicine cat yet, anyways, comments?
-Danisnotonfire 22:20, December 10, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a bit. It's really pretty. And lighten the eye color a little too. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:27, December 11, 2012 (UTC)
Re-ups! And the eyes are fine, they're supposed to be like that. It's actually natural for a cat's eyes and paw-pads to darken when they are stressed. (according to mah mother) -BlazeXApple forever 17:23, December 11, 2012 (UTC)
Awesome feaths! maybe make her white paws look white? Bbunlegs
They do look white... o3o -BlazeXApple forever 19:10, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
I thought she was supposed to have a scar on her head? If so, then define it ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 21:57, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
Also, I thought she was dead so she cant be a queen.....? ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 22:52, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
She's not dead. -BlazeXApple forever 10:24, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? The scar would have faded by now. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 19:58, December 17, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
She needs the scar.~CH
Re--uploaded. Continuing CBA.... -BlazeXApple forever 19:05, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the scar and make it darker and make it thinner like the apprentice, because if its more in time, it would be as thin/transparent or more. ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 21:07, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Yeah I changed it a bit c: -BlazeXApple forever 13:27, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. -StrongXAlpine 18:40, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Hawkheart (W) ~ CBA[]
This is the evil Hawkheart, though I just LOVE his color of fur, (Hawkfrost), Comments? ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you!
23:06, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? <333 Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 20:31, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 20:34, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Skyfoot (W) ~ CBA[]
Choco torties ftw! Comments? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 23:34, December 18, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Add some more white. -BlazeXApple forever 11:09, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
Fez, I'm pretty sure in her life image, it only shows a white chest. Bbun (talk) 19:23, December 20, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Ok. CBA? -StrongXAlpine 21:05, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry to interrupt, but if it's a white chest the white wouldn't go onto the leg. Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 23:58, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Its supposed to be like that, since that's the only way I can smudge the belly. Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 00:45, December 22, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Prey-Hunter blanks ~ CBA[]
The eyes were evil... x.x Comments? ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 23:44, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
There's uneven lineart on the tail. And thin the tail a bit.--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 23:48, December 15, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
Tuck in the chest a belly a tad. prey-hunters are very small, light cats, so they aren't uite as full as a typical cat from the clans. Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 00:02, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
I've tucked in the belly for the longhaired blank, and I will do it for the shorthaired. Also, I used a real life image, and the tail was that thick. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 00:07, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-ups. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 00:12, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
These are also fairly small, lightly-built cats, so the tail should be a little sleeker. Round out the toes for the lifted front paw a little. This looks good. x3 Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 02:24, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
I love these so much <3333 The line coming out from the leg furthest from us... remove that? idk what it is o3o -BlazeXApple forever 10:29, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
It defines her rump. It's okay. x3 Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 13:53, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
It's buttcheeks? O.O RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 19:07, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, but the line is from the real life pic. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 21:37, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded, buttzies. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 21:54, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
The eyes are a bit odd... round them out a bit. It's really pretty <333 68.225.219.103 23:27, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-ups. BTW, who are you? ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 23:49, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
AGH it's spotted xD Something logged me out apparently :P Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:05, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
I think they should be looking forward, if they're stalking something. Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 20:36, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
I think the pose is fine...this gives us an interesting angle of the face. Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 03:40, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? -StrongXAlpine 21:05, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Approved.BbunlegsBbun (talk) 02:22, December 22, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Pinefur (W) ~ CBA[]
Poor Pinefur! Comments? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 19:12, December 19, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Lighten the brown. It looks far too dark, I know it's supposed to be dark, but I can't see the lineart. -StrongXAlpine 19:02, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 19:12, December 20, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
CBA? -StrongXAlpine 19:17, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the earpink a tad. Beautiful Beebs~ <3333 68.225.219.103 21:46, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Continuing CBA. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 23:50, December 20, 2012 (UTC)bbun
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 03:15, December 22, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Petalkit (Ki) ~ CBA[]
i love this kid 8D Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 03:50, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
She's adorable... um, did you do something to the eye lineart? Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 19:05, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
WOW. CBA? -StrongXAlpine 22:57, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 22:58, December 22, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Goldentalon (K) ~ CBA[]
Comments? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 21:29, December 18, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Lighten the spine shading a bit, if you can <33 It's really pretty. Also smudge the stripes abit and blur the markings a tiny bit. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:30, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 23:51, December 20, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
CBA? RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 02:14, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
Approved.BbunlegsBbun (talk) 03:10, December 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Blackstar (D)~ CBA[]
Comments? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 19:25, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
I know we don't use pure black for black cats, but darken her. She looks more gray than black.--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 22:54, December 17, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
She doesn't have to be solid black. She's pretty dark as it is. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 22:25, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
I think the black looks fine. Maybe blur the shading....? ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 20:26, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
Reups^ I darkened the black anyways. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 20:40, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 18:42, December 22, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 14:49, December 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Blackstar (W)~ CBA[]
Comments? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 19:26, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Same as I posted on her deputy charart.--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 22:56, December 17, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
She doesn't have to be solid black. She's pretty dark as it is. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 22:26, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reups^ I decided to darken it after all. Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 20:41, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 18:41, December 22, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 14:50, December 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Auroraspirit (K) ~ CBA[]
K...... I know she's a little.... green...... but she's supposed to be like that, so please don't complain about it, mkay? ouo Anyways...... I think I did good on her. So since Stoem took over Icefeather, and (hopefully) Leaf is going to be declined and Nightheart is (hopefully) going to be approved, I thought I'd put this one up, ya know? Comments/Suggestions? ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 21:46, December 11, 2012 (UTC)
Had to re-do the eyes, cause they're supposed to be icy blue. Reups. ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 20:23, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe Blur the shading. ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 22:51, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
There was white spots. Reups. ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 15:09, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? I love dem eyes? <3 RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 23:56, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 18:56, December 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Gingerpaw (SPC) (A) ~CBA[]
The spoiled brother of Warmpelt. Comments? I tried to match his life image ;_; BbunlegsBbun (talk) 17:24, December 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Smudge the white on the tail~ Beautiful, Beebs. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 20:10, December 24, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 20:16, December 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
CBA? He looks flawless to me. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 15:49, December 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
I don't think you can cba your own work... But I was about to CBA it... BUt, for future reference, don;t CBA your own work, unless you have been told you can do sw, k? So lol CBA? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 17:48, December 25, 2012 (UTC)
You CANT CBA your own work, Bbun, but you can approve it. just as a warning to you, dont do it again. ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 03:38, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
Okay, I'll remember that next time. Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 17:11, December 26, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Halokit (K) ~ CBA[]
This is meh Halokit <33333333333333 Actually, I am proud of her charart, and dont say anything about the fact that her tail gets fluffier as it hits the tip, its supposed to be that way, its how I imagine her, anyways Comments? ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 03:36, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
Cute! Fix her angel wing splotches so that they go on her sides(originally, I thought it was her back) and lighten the shading. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 03:39, December 26, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Reups! With the wing thing, I made it smaller, but in reality, the wing-shape starts at the beggining of her stomach and ends at the tip of her hip bone in her back legs. It doesnt totch her back, actually. But, yea, thats how I aimge it, and it will be clearer when she becomes a warrior and I post her warrior charart. ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 04:04, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
WOW her tail o.o. CBA? This is beautiful. -silver shells, silent moons 14:27, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
Approved.BbunlegsBbun (talk) 18:32, December 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Shallowsplash (W) ~ CBA[]
I tried to match her real life image...I rather like this. Comments? 8D Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 22:56, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
AMG IT'S BEAUTIFUL <3333 *explodes from beautiful-sight overload* Maybe blur the leg shading a tad? If I had the authority, I would so CBA this, but unfortunately I don't ._. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 20:09, December 24, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a tiny bit, and blur it Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 17:46, December 25, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. —Rainlegs ❄ 05:24, December 26, 2012 (UTC)\
akisdhgasldgh'lkashbljkdsb CBA? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 14:30, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
Approved.BbunlegsBbun (talk) 18:43, December 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Acorn That Falls From Tree (PH)~ CBA[]
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU I ACCIDENTALLY CLOSED OUT OF PIXLR AND LOST THE LAYERS. Comments? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 22:02, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
Whiten her white parts. When you do that, I will CBA this. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 23:47, December 22, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Define the shading a little. il this<333 Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 23:48, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
Meh. I made her be in a brighter light, kinda. Reups. Snowfern 19:49, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
ok NOW changes are showing, and Beebs, I made her paws and muzzle be gray (I changed her description) cause I like it. It looks cool x3 Snowfern 19:30, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten her shading a bit. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 19:31, December 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Shading's fine. CBA? Feather 19:33, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 03:11, December 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Dovepaw (K) ~ CBA[]
-silver shells, silent moons, the foot of lightning 22:48, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
It's been nearly 2 days. I'm going to CBA this. (look at Steamcloud before you kill me) Feather 10:13, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. Feather 10:57, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Tanzanitepaw (App) ~ CBA[]
I love Tanzanite. Comments? ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 20:51, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
Beautiful, Crys <333 Smudge the earpink a bit, lighten the leg shading a teensy bit and make the eye color a little less neon-y. I lurvs it <3333 Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 21:09, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
Her eyes are like that, and I dun have teh smudge tool. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 21:55, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-ups. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 00:56, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
Could you blur the stripes? ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 22:52, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
If I blur it any more, it'll look blotchy. .-. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 04:01, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 02:26, December 28, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Approved. ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 21:09, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Tanzanitepaw (Ki) ~ CBA[]
She is exactly like Iolite. Comments? ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 00:39, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
Oh... -has just read the description- Naow I haff to redo Iolite and Tanzanite... ._. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 00:41, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
Re-ups. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 00:54, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
The black tip at the end of her tail is a bit too dark. Could you lighten it? ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 22:50, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
Can't, if I make it any lighter, it looks gray. And it's hard to actually lighten the tail. ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 22:58, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
The tail looks fine imo. Although, could you please define the earpink on the ----> right ear? (our right, so the cat's left) Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 17:22, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
The earpink is cover by the earpink... ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 03:56, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
- wut — ♪ Eremin ♪ Sorry, I'm obsessed ☆ 22:58, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Derp, the earpink is covered by the shading. x3 ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 23:07, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
=P A month without a comment, so like Feather... CBA... ❄ A wild Giratina appeared! ❄ 20:02, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 21:10, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Swiftstrike (A) - CBA[]
Mah Swifty~ Comments? Paleggy Ship it 01:43, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Holy fffffffff---- you must teach me the art of your epicness >o< Define the earpink alittle on his right ear. (His right, not ours)— beetlejuice✦✧✦ 01:51, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Paleggy Ship it 02:20, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
<3333 CBA? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 02:24, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 02:28, December 30, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Cross-scar (W) - CBA[]
File:Crossscar.warrior.png Again, beebs said I could. Dun know if the name's a problem, gimp wouldn't let me save with a - in it. Trust me, I can't define the scar anymore, so don't bother asking. Comments? Paleggy Ship it 04:27, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
<333 CBA? I can't find anything wrong with him. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 04:30, December 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Wait, where even IS the scar? Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 20:56, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Over the eye. ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 21:17, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 04:27, December 30, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Toadkit (K) - CBA[]
Beebs told me I could. ouo Ya furry! Comments? Paleggy Ship it 02:39, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
aww you did the eye thing that Leggu did <33333 I love it. CBA? Feather 11:46, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Actually it was me who did that eye thing on Petalkit.... *cough* Paleggy Ship it 22:07, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
ilu darling —Leggy 23:15, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
-breaks apart the couple- ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 03:13, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
*puts us back together* Paleggy Ship it 09:32, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Oh, was it? Sorry xD Anyways, yeah, it's been almost 24 hours, so approved. .Feather 09:44, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Brindleflower (W) ~ CBA[]
Due to popular vote, Brindleflower gets put up. Comments? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 18:52, December 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
do her eye and nose. Feather 19:27, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 19:51, December 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Blur the orange spots. And it doesnt look like there is any eye color/depth. ♥Stoemstar❄ My special little boy <333333 02:34, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
I think the spots are fine. Lighten the shading a tad, as well as the spots even. Just grab the dodge tool, set it to the lowest setting and rub it along its body and head-- The neck blotch is fine. Beautiful~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:11, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. The spots don't need lightening, they're smudged ginger.BbunlegsBbun (talk) 04:17, December 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
CBA? Feather 14:55, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 17:47, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Clawtooth (W) ~ CBA[]
Comments? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 17:37, December 28, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Make the scars a little more sharper-- not blurred-wise (actually you could to that a teensy bit) but make the ends slightly sharper. A cat's claw sometimes kind of flicks as it leaves something, I believe. Or something like that. Anyways, make the ends sharper. Smudge the earpink a tad and define the eye color. Blur the shading a tad. Overall, really beautiful. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:07, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
Look at Winterblaze's scars, and you'll see they aren't that sharp. The eye color is amber, and it doesn't need to be defined. I will blur his earpink though. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 01:57, December 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
nvm, Re-uploaded.BbunlegsBbun (talk) 04:16, December 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Smudge the earpink into the pelt a little bit. ShoonChristmas is in the air~! 14:54, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 15:23, December 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
CBA? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 20:24, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 20:32, December 30, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Hailclaw (W) ~ CBA[]
Comments? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 18:32, December 22, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Smooth out the shading. RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 23:52, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
Did you blur the earpink? Smudge it as well<3 ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 01:54, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Redid the shading. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 20:21, December 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
CBA? Feather 14:53, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
(don't murder me for disrupting the CBA) Lighten the shading a tiny bit. Beautiful, Beebs~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 22:27, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Shading's fine. Continuing CBA. — beetlejuice✦✧✦ 22:29, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 01:13, December 31, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Shiftkit (Ki) ~ CBA[]
His warrior name will be Shiftkey. 8D I <3 GIMP, comments? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:08, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
asdf ❄ A wild Giratina appeared! ❄ 21:22, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
Lol, anything? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:33, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
asdfomfghessosexy CBA? — beetlejuice✦✧✦ 01:53, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Asdf could you define the shading a smidge? —Leggy 14:57, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Shading's fine imo. Continuing CBA. Feather 15:00, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry I agree with leggy, it could be defined. It's just a tad flat right now. Paleggy Ship it 09:33, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
._. Not lightening it if you ask. Re-Ups^ |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 15:07, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 17:13, December 30, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Approved<3 — beetlejuice✦✧✦ 17:39, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Azuregaze (W) ~ CBA[]
-sorta needed an excuse so I could make a cat missing an eye with a bunch of scars and an elongated tail- —Rainlegs ❄ 00:32, December 24, 2012 (UTC)h
Maybe... Um... Make the eye look like it's scarred over. Like, with the line where the scar tissue mended together... If that made sense... or rather x3 Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 17:40, December 25, 2012 (UTC)
Actually, scratch that, I read his decription. Anyways, make it so that the scar is kinda a little over the line art. Humor me and try it please, i want to see how it looks. x3 Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 17:44, December 25, 2012 (UTC)
But the eye socket's empty...the scar wouldn't go over it, as this is a hole in his face. o.o —Rainlegs ❄ 05:22, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
Okay, fine, I'll humor you... xD —Rainlegs ❄ 05:25, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
So, do we have the eye socket as normal, or do we add scars over it? —Leggy 15:08, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
It's fine imho. CBA? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 14:20, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. .Feather 16:47, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Loonface (W) ~ CBA[]
Comments? His chest scar was from the fight with Tanzaniteshadow btw. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 18:19, December 30, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Make the white on his paws go a little farther up his paws, unless it's just white toes. Blur and smudge the earpink slightly and blur the muzzle white. Beautiful Beebs~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 22:37, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
The white on his paws were that far on his kit charart. I'm going to do the other parts you said ^^. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 22:42, December 30, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
OMG SO SEXY<33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 Define the shading. .Feather 09:59, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 16:23, December 31, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
-has sex with- CBA? .Feather 19:38, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
No, it was Tanzaniteshadow who spent time with Loonface. XD ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 20:16, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 19:39, January 1, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Loonface (A) ~ CBA[]
Comments? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 01:32, January 1, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Well, idk if I am allowed to comment, but that.. is.. sexy... I can't see anything wrong. Dawnsong2 (talk) 05:33, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Yeah... I see no flaws.. CBA? .Feather 11:37, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 15:58, January 2, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Tanzaniteshadow (W) ~ CBA[]
I love her pattern, it's a new tabby style, and a bit different from the rest of her chararts, cause it's Leggu inspired. Comments? ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 21:15, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Beautimous.(You might have to redo her other chararts to match the stripes.) Maybe define the shading? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 21:18, December 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Holy shit <333 Define the nose pink. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:19, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Amg it's beautiful~ Make the white on her paws a teensy bit whiter and blur the earpink. One word; SEXY~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 21:20, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
I cant make the paws any whiter, and if I blur teh earpink more, it'll look smudgy. x3 ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 21:22, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Reupupupupup ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 21:31, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Hey nice tabby 8D Are you sure you can't lighten the paws any more? —Leggy 23:19, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
No, it's 100% white ._. ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 23:39, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Then lighten the shading on the paws a little. —Leggy 13:49, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
I can't .-. ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 19:11, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Add highlights to the paws, over the shaidng? Not drastic, but enough to lighten the color. These paws look silver. —Leggy 22:42, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ❄ The Distortion World's Giratina appeared! ❄ 20:15, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 20:18, January 1, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Approved. ♥Stoemstar❄ My special little boy <333333 22:19, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
StarClan Blanks ~ CBA[]
Comments? I'll make a female and longhairs once this boy's approved. —Rainlegs ❄ 03:28, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
Smooth out the tail lineart a bit, make the jaw slightly more squarish, and shrink the far toe on the front paw closest to us. :3 Paleggy Ship it 03:31, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. —Rainlegs ❄ 03:38, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
The bottom jaw shouldnt be round and crest into the head, it should be straight until it curves at the end. If you dont get wtf im saying, then ill provide a picture of what i mean. ♥Stoemstar❄ My special little boy <333333 03:43, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
Reups^^. Yeah, I got it. xD —Leggy 15:36, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Stars in the pelt? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 17:09, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
I think its completely optional if someone wants to do that. Not all of them are described with the stars, and sometimes its hard to tell if the StarClan cat is from StarClan at all xD. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 17:10, December 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
We agreed already owo. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 17:13, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
I think we can trust the artist to make stars...but we're going to have to play picky if we let them do stars. —Leggy 18:12, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Shrink the ears just a tiny bit. Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 02:50, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. —Leggy 14:00, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Idk make the top part of the jaw cone out a bit to where it's not as short as the bottom. Like the deputy blanks<3 20:00, December 30, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
Make the eyes a bit bigger. I love it~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 22:39, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
If this is shorthaired, remove the fur on the legs and chest. 02:37, December 31, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
The jaw's fine..it's completely a copy of my ref image's. As for eyes, the size is the same as the ref's. As for fur, short-furred doesn't mean bald. The fur's fine at those points. The longhair's fur will be more floofy. —Leggy 02:44, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Do you mind telling me what position this blank is representing? c: ❆Lilydust❆Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas~ 00:33, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Up top, in the header. xD —Leggy 01:08, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Don't see anything wrong, nice job leggo. Paleggy Ship it 16:16, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? .Feather 16:22, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Approved. Snowie♥ Luna is the best princess 5ever~ 18:58, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Nightheart (K) ~ CBA[]
My Nighty<333 She didn't have her scar as a kit. Comments? So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 19:09, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the earpink. This is a sexu black cat, Mossu. <3 |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 19:49, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Reups. :3 So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 19:55, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Blur it a tad too. SexuuuSpottedpool AutumnClan (talk) Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 22:35, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Reups. So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 20:42, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Blur it a lot more. .Feather 16:54, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Reups. So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 17:01, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
change the nose colour either darker or lighter and I'll CBA this. .Feather 17:09, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Reups. Darkened the nose color. So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 17:23, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 20:17, January 1, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Define the nose pink a tad~ Really pretty! Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:26, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
It's supposed to be gray. Continuing CBA. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 20:15, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 21:09, January 3, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Auroraspirit (A) ~ CBA[]
As the same with the kit, please don't comment on how green she looks. Comments? ❄Moss❄Have a very Mossy Christmas~ 00:40, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading o3o, but Beautiful <3 ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 03:37, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
There's a bit of waste above the tail, but overall <3 Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 05:08, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
I'm sorry, I lost the layers to this. x.x I'm remaking it right now. So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 20:44, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Reups So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 21:29, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Reups Re-did the eyes. So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 21:53, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 16:03, January 2, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 21:09, January 3, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Leader Blanks (S) ~ CBA[]
Okay, I know these need work, but comments? RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 23:00, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
OMG but the ears seem a little too big... and they connect to the back... ❄ Crystalheart ❄ We wish you a merry Crystmas 23:03, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
They're pretty good. Though there's hardly any body and a stubby tail... The whiskers could be thinned a tad, the ears connect with the back, and the shoulder is too small and kind of squared. It's very sexuuu, though <33
Cute, Rowan x3 I love this position. It's a bit boxy, if you know what I mean. I think if you curve the lines to make it more naatural, and you just edit a few things, these will be awesome. Also, I don't know if it's just me, but the blank is really big. Also, the arms are a bit short. Great work, though :3 ❀Lilydust~❀ 23:15, December 7, 2012 (UTC)
I love these... Maybe thicken the ear line-art on our right? And Lily, I think the size is fine, the warrior blanks are bigger. — ♪ Eremin ♪ Sorry, I'm obsessed ☆ 23:13, December 9, 2012 (UTC)
Thers a bit of waste on the bigger ear. Make the tail a little longer<3333 Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 20:20, December 11, 2012 (UTC)
RE-UPS^ I based it off of a real-life image: http://www.iaza.com/work/121214C/iaza16712454959200.png So I like the tail length. RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 23:49, December 13, 2012 (UTC)
Shorten the eye/whisker thingies... most of our blanks don't even have those o3o Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 21:46, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
It's fine imo. I see nothing wrong. I love them. <3 dont shoot me CBA? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 21:51, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
Nope, it needs work. RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 21:54, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
I would say seperate the body from the ear/head with a bit of fur underneath the ear on the left. But really good Rowie <3 ♥Stoemstar❄ All I want for Christmas is you! 21:55, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Ups^ Changes aren't showing. Well, it depends on your computer. RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 19:03, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
I don't think we need blanks this big but it is really good! Maybe thin out the whisker lines a tiny bit. Rainy ish back! 01:49, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Ups^ For the last time...the warrior blanks are bigger. RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 21:20, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 21:19, December 18, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
Shrink the front paws a bit and the toes on the front paws look... funny.--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 17:09, December 19, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
Re-ups^ Changes are being a butt. RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 21:44, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Isee them<3 PERFECT<3 I'm now going to.... CBA? Snowfern I wish you a merry Christmas 21:45, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
adkjhdaslkgja I feel like a bitch for interrupting the CBA again...but the lines could use a little work regarding the angle you're trying to achieve. My main issue and argument is the cat's right ear...there would be a separation between the base of the ear and the side/back of the head. The ear should be cut off smaller, and then another line would be drawn from the base, curving slightly along the cat's jawline. The only other problem I see with these is the belly...there would be a little more belly between the front paws and hind legs shown along the right side, according to our view. The chest wouldn't be a straight, horizontal line- it would curve down to form the belly/side. that's a lot of words to describe two lines...but yeah. If none of this makes sense, I'd be happy to redline. :s Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 01:41, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
Can you redline? x3 RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 15:18, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
I tried my best. If ya can't read my handwriting, the blue is where you remove lines, and red is where ya add lines/some of my ref work so I could get stuff right. I ended up redlining the entire thing, so sorry if it's a bunch of extra work D: Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 21:49, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Ups^ Thanks. :3 RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 21:19, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
8D You;'re so close. But i goofed up on the lineart, and the rest of their hind leg should be showing by the area where we adjusted the chest, and that section of chest should be slanted downwards more. Smooth out the line to the left of their left leg, and add a gap in the line along the jaw, so it looks like the head's connected to the body. The line along the jaw shouldn't connect with the insdie of the ear, it should connect with the outside nub. Their right front leg's a little plump; thin it out in the upper half. Other then thos eminor tweaks..these look fantastic. 8D Leggy Fowl Aurum Est Potestas 21:24, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
Could you redline what I missed? Dx Re-Uploaded some. RowanAll I want for Christmas...is you! 23:11, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
The head shouldn't go into the ear line. Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 21:54, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
this little message is just to remind you of what we went over in our join.me c: And, don't change the eyes to be corssed like they are in the redline above... they're fine how they are.. —Leggy 00:35, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
gtfo female leaders blanks y u no show. Re-Ups^ |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 22:04, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 22:05, January 1, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
One last, minor thing: the line that shows the curve of the chest should connect with the front leg's line. That's all. —Leggy 22:14, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Re-Ups^ |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 20:30, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? ❄ Happy New Years! ❄ 20:32, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
1. You forgot the heading. 2. Changes are being an ass. 3. There was a missing pixel on the leg but I fixed it. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 20:35, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Approved. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:27, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Mousekit (K)~ CBA[]
The worst tabby this wiki will ever see ;u; Amg though, my little Mousey is adorbs~ Comments, concerns? Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:10, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Aah, cutee<3 Define the shading. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 23:16, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Re-ups. The shading opacity was at 50%. Zoomed it ahead to 68%. And Idk why it isn't transparent : P I'll try to fix it. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:23, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
AGH I think I thumbed it by accident. It's fixed nao. :3 Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:24, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Not a big triangle tabbies fan though :/. Anyways, add more stripes. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 23:25, December 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun
I can't do tabbies any other way *crawls in a hole and dies* Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:27, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Re-ups. Totally redid the stripes~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:39, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Bbun. The amount of stripes is totally up to the artist -.-. Define the shading a weee bit.-- 00:23, December 30, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
Re-ups. Lightened it just a tad, as I thought it was fine before. Changes may not be showing, though. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:34, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
ASDFGHJKL I meant defined xDDD Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 21:21, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste on the bottom right corner. Remove that, please? I'll CBA it after this. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 00:33, January 2, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Re-ups. I couldn't find it, but I erased the corner with waste on every layer~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:51, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 00:53, January 2, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Approved. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:27, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Bluekit (Ki) ~ CBA[]
Well, that was fun. —Leggy 01:58, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry Leggy, but declined for 24 hours. You forgot the category. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 02:36, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
lol back up ouo. .Feather 10:26, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the pelt color the slightest bit and define the ear and nose pink. I lurvs her~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:34, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
I'd rather not lighten her pelt color...she's black. =P And the nose color is almost too close to actual black-black to be defined...but I can give it a shot. —Leggy 00:46, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I also played around with the colors and white in ehr eyes...just made it so her eyes have more depth and the white pixels were both centered. x3 —Leggy 00:50, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Define earpink a tiny bit?— beetlejuice✦✧✦ 01:10, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Reuploaded. —Leggy 01:23, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? .Feather 16:23, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Approved. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:27, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Willowkit (Ki) ~ CBA[]
-won't forget category this time- x.x —Leggy 14:14, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the pelt color a teensy, TEENSY bit so the shading is a little more visible. Blur her blaze. I lurvs it Leggu~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 22:37, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
I'll darken her shading, instead of lighten her pelt color, in the next upload...she's supposed to be this dark of a gray. As for the blaze, Id rather not, as the bridge of her nose would have very, very short fur- any markings would be very sharp, crisp, and smudged upwards. o3o —Leggy 22:41, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
reuploaded. I only darkened the shading a little...it's pretty dark on her haunch. —Leggy 03:31, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink~ I really like it~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:35, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks :D —Leggy 00:47, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Define it just a little more please? Especially on our right (her left) ear. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 00:52, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
It's mostly shading there...and on a real, fluffy cat, a mojority of the ear would be covered by floofy fur. You'd barely be able to see it... —Leggy 00:55, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
CBA?— beetlejuice✦✧✦ 01:08, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Approved. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:27, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Pantherheart (Q) ~ CBA[]
My sexu Pantherheart<3333 She's gonna have her kits any day, so I might as well post her queen <3 Comments, concerns, quips, quotes and conundrums? Snowie♥ Luna is the best princess 5ever~ 22:16, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
The earpink is a little too red. :3 Once upon a Christmas...I mean, Raven 22:24, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
It's the exact same as Lightningdash's and hers got approved o.o Snowie♥ Luna is the best princess 5ever~ 22:43, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
lol .Feather 10:00, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
There's the teeniest tiniest ear-pink waste by the torn ear, and maybe blur the shading a tiny bit? — ♪ Eremin ♪ Sorry, I'm obsessed ☆ 05:34, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
The shading is the same as Lightningdash's too, but I'll fix the earpink waste~ Snowie♥ Luna is the best princess 5ever~ 05:49, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Re-ups~ Changes ain't showing Snowie♥ Luna is the best princess 5ever~ 05:55, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 20:14, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Approved. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:27, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Cheetahpaw (A) ~ CBA[]
This is meh Cheetahpaw<33333 Rowie helped me with this, so give credit to her. Comments? ♥Stoemstar❄ My special little boy <333333 21:41, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Beautiful, Stoem! I love it! Define the shading a tad and make his eyes a tad less neon. Beautimous~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 22:02, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Reups I think that the shading is fine, though. ♥Stoemstar❄ My special little boy <333333 22:35, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
So sexy<33 The stripes on the tail are overblurred.Cryptid Yo 23:36, January 1, 2013 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
I think they're fine. In fact, you could even blur them a tad more if you want, Stoem~ But it's just my opinion. Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 23:42, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Actually, those arent stripes, they are rings around the tail, if you look at his kit image and his life image which is my real cat. I know what im doing about the pattern, tabby, etc. Im looking off my real cat so yea. ♥Stoemstar❄ My special little boy <333333 00:53, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Dude. We don't care/know if they're stripes or rings. We can't see it all. It's not 3D. Just blur them. -is very annoyed at the moment btw- .Feather 14:12, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
I think the rings are fine. No need to define or blur them any further. —Leggy 14:42, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
I watched her make it. I thought it was ALL fine, imho. CBA? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 20:45, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
<3333333333 *shouldv'e commented earlier but hey * So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 20:50, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Approved, bestie. :3 |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:27, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
StarClan Blanks (SH F) ~ Approved[]
Here she is..Paleh's making the longhairs. —Leggy 19:08, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Auto approved. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 21:27, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Tealpaw (A) ~ CBA[]
I was totally unaware that she became an apprentice ouo anways, here she is! ❆Lilydust❆Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas~ 20:42, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
<3333333333 *tries to point out flaws but can't* :3333 So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 20:48, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
ermahgawd cba? .Feather 21:06, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
Blur the spots a tad and redden the earpink. Also, define the shading a teensy-bit. I lurvs it~ Spottedpool AutumnClan (talk) 22:05, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
I think that those things are all okay: her earpink is the same as her kit, I see the shading fine, and I made sure that the spots looked the same/were blurred at the same amount as her kit. If you still want me to do those things, I will. That's just my reasoning. c: ❆Lilydust❆Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas~ 00:06, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Yeah, I agree, everything matches perfectly with her kit. Sexuu, Lilzy <3 CBA? Snowie♥ Luna is the best princess 5ever~ 19:02, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Approved. ♥Stoemstar❄ My special little boy <333333 21:11, January 4, 2013 (UTC)
Kinktail (E) ~ CBA[]
I love him!<3 Comments? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 22:09, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Holy crap. o.o There's nothing I can really say about this. I can't CBA though ._. So....I heard u liek.. Oshawottz? 22:11, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
Add the scar to his tail. So sexxu<3Cryptid Yo 00:20, January 1, 2013 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93
What scar? |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 00:36, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
"and a crooked tail, that is battle scarred." <--- From his page lol ❆Lilydust❆Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas~ 00:44, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
God I suck at stripes. Changes are being an ass so here. |Rowan Winston "Does this darkness have a name..? Is it your name?'" 22:27, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? BbunlegsBbun (talk) 22:13, January 2, 2013 (UTC)Bbun
Approved. BbunlegsBbun (talk) 17:47, January 6, 2013 (UTC)Bbun